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Chapter 1 first draft
« on: June 21, 2012, 08:33:15 pm »
Here is what I have wrote for the first draft oF chapter 1, it is very complex and took around 10 mins to write. There are 6 missions so far. It is very long. Please post suggestions for names and stuff. Befreak, you can help with chapter 2 if you like

Level 1 for game

Starts with cut scene of player making robot, robot comes to life and hits him into a wall then runs up stairs and runs off into the bushes.

Player starts with no weapons. He then says that he is going to have to fight his way to his boat to get more weapons and research papers. 

Mission one, drive the car to the boat without crashing the car.

When player arrives, there is a robot there already player has to kill by a headshot. Once robot is dead the player has to search the boat for research papers and more guns.

When retrieved papers, player needs to drive back to the house.
Cutscene: player spreads papers on table and begins to read, after a minute of reading a robot smashes through the window and rips half the paper off him then runs down hill.

Mission 2: follow that robot!
Player has to follow the robot to where it go's (abandoned camp on island) then has to kill it without player being detected. If player is detected and kills player, 10 more harder to kill robots appear and begin to attack. If player dies mission failed. After recovered the papers head back to the hideout and place them together
Cutscene: player reading papers out loud which reveals a way to kill all the robots on the island and that the robots will continue to reproduce until the mother of robots is dead (the original in the Cutscene).

Mission 3: the hunt for the mother
A satellite scan of the island reveals the mother is hiding out in a secret robot camp (to be decided location later). Player decides so go to this camp but later realises that it is surrounded by robots and is impossible to breach. Nevertheless the player attempts anyway, (no matter what player controller does he will always fail) and is supposedly dead.
Cutscene: Starts with black screen, player opens eyes and closes again the opens. He sees bare human feet and realises he isn't dead. He then grabs on to hand and is helped up. He asks his rescuer who she is, she says she is from Canada and her boat crashed on this island and that she is the only survivor of the crash. The rest were eaten by robots. They then return to hideout and start talking about destroying all the robots. Player explains to woman that all robots a linked through the mother of all the robots and that killing her will destroy them all.

Mission 4: Red lights
(nighttime) player sees small red lights outside the window and decides to investigate with his new partner. When they get to where they believe the lights were a small creature like robot jumps on to players face. After pulling it off and stamping on it he sees a note attached. It reads: if you are reading this you are human, we are the last of the survivors of the robot attacks on our island meet us at (position). Player must go to the which plays Cutscene with the note writer.
The writer of the note reveals that player was not the creator of the robots, they were sent here from space to take over the earth, who ever sent the robots didn't realise the size of the people of earth and that it had vast oceans. The robots are realy tiny. The robots thought that this island was the whole of earth and decided to pick off our tribe one by one by crawling up our noses while we slept. It wasn't until your invention of the humanoid robot when they got more powerful. One of the tiny robots became a part of your invention and then Started multiplying. The only way to kill them now is by killing either the sender of the robots or the mother of them all. That's the one you created.

Mission 5: MOAR (mother of all robots)
Player must sneak into robot base by using helicopter and parachuting in to kill the MOAR. Player uses silenced gun and needs to kill each robot with one shot to the head. If a robot sees the player he will start to attack with a minigun, which will almost certainly cause the player to die. Player can pick up minigun if he kills a robot with one. Once he reaches chamber where MOAR is. He thinks there is nothing there other than a small podium in the centre of the room. Cutscene: tiny bug jumps up and scurries out the door.

Mission 6: The first sign of the apocalypse.
While player is chasing the MOAR, he catches a glimpse of what appears to be robots building a nuclear bomb. Player then realises that destroying the robots on the island isn't his first priority. Things start to heat up. In a rage the player kills all the robots working on the bomb and sets off the alams. Player must shoot his way out of the robot base and return to the note writer

Chapter 1 END


Player explains to note writer and survivor what he saw

Chapter 2 beginning

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